I'm
especially pleased with this book. In 2009, I finished my NaNoWriMo
novel, The Ninja Tattoo, early and got an idea for another book. I
started on it Thanksgiving afternoon and finished it in four days. In
addition to my NaNo novel, I wrote Checkmate, another 54,066 word
novel. I'm pretty proud of that and I'm pretty proud of the book,
too.
Dane
Berry is a body building chess champion. He meets Milla Cochran on an
elevator at a hotel where they are both staying. There is an
immediate connection and they both know it's a matter of timing
before they get together. Unfortunately, right after that, things get
crazy and there have already been a couple attempts on Dane's life.
With the help of the local police and a friendly FBI agent, Milla and
Dane are trying to figure out who's trying to kill him and why. This
excerpt takes place right after Milla confesses, over the phone, that
she's ready to make love to Dane. Cam is one of his bodyguards.
Dane
was in agony. Milla had just admitted to him that she wanted him to
make love to her and he couldn't act on it. Balling his pillow up, he
threw it across the room.
"Dammit!"
He tried to control his volume, but realized too late that he hadn't.
There
was a knock at the door. Cam peered around the edge of the door. "You
okay?"
"My
life sucks, if you hadn't noticed."
"Could
be worse," Cam said, stepping into the room. "You could be
laid up in the hospital, or dead. Of the three choices, I think
you've got the best one."
"Yeah,
you have a point. And I have the worst case of blue balls I've ever
had in my entire life. I've gone longer than this, what's wrong with
me?"
"You
want the perfect woman and you can't have her yet. It's happened to
all of us at one time or another. Time to break out your two best
friends," he held up his hands. "Thing One and Thing Two.
Open a bottle of Jim Beam and party."
"You
have a unique way of putting it."
"It's
not a bad thing, you know. Lots of guys indulge on a regular basis."
"Yeah,
well. . . . Does it make me a pathetic loser?"
"No,
man, cause it's gonna happen. You're only a pathetic loser if that's
the extent of your sex life and always has been. Look at
Wronski, dude. He's what, a year older than you?"
"Three."
"Okay,
so Wronski. He's not even in the game anymore. Poor guy's probably
never been laid a single day in his life, and he's playing solo
soccer every night so his balls don't turn to concrete."
"Such
a nice way of putting it. Thanks for reminding me why we don't have
heart to hearts very often."
"Look,
kid, I know you miss Grady. You and him have a connection that the
rest of us don't have. And that's okay. It isn't always good to get
too close to the client. But I consider you like family. My advice,
free of charge, whisk that girl off to a wedding chapel, have a nice
meal, then go home and fuck all night."
"Thanks,
Cam. That's one of the best ideas I've heard."
"Don't
get smart-assed, kid. It doesn't suit you."
"I'm
serious, dammit. But what kind of a life am I inviting her into right
now? Am I doing her a favor to marry the girl and leave her a widow?
Could you?"
"No,
Dane. I couldn't and I know you can't either. But this won't last
forever. Then you can take care of business. Get some sleep."
"I'm
gonna try." Dane lay down, flinging an arm across his eyes.
"Night,
Dane."
"Night,
Cam."
Cam
left, turning out the light and shutting the door behind him. Dane
knew he and the others would sleep in shifts, having one awake at all
times. He felt like a heel keeping them from a full night's sleep.
"I
swear," he promised himself. "When this is over, we all go
on vacation. They can go anywhere they want and I'm going to take
Milla to the Bahamas or Puerto Rico, somewhere lush and tropical."
And fuck her brains out, his
Id added with a leer.
Being
careful not to yell again, he lay on his bed trying to sleep, but it
eluded him. Attempting to bore himself to sleep, he reviewed chess
moves in his mind. Picturing three different boards, he made moves
and counter moves automatically, trying to stump himself.
Concentrating
on one board, he started to see a pattern emerge that he hadn't even
considered before. He was playing white, the black taking on a
menacing aspect in his mind. For some reason, his mind had applied
faces to the pieces. He saw himself as the white knight. Milla's face
graced the white queen and his father's the bishop. Across the board,
glowering at him, Angus McInnis' face was on the black king piece.
The anonymous gunman was a rook. They were advancing slowly toward
him, leaving him no place to retreat. The faces on the other pieces
were hidden in shadow, but the face on the black queen kept
flickering at him as if he should know something that escaped him.
Sitting up, he broke out in a cold sweat.
"That's
it!" He couldn't explain how he knew, but it was finally
becoming clear.
Lying
back down, he snuggled under the blankets, suddenly cold. This was
why they were trying to kill him, he was sure. But how could he prove
it? And how could he make anyone, even those closest to him, believe
it? Allowing the chess pieces to make their moves, he watched the
board carefully, formulating a strategy.
©
Dellani Oakes 2015
2 comments:
hilarious as usual
Thank you! This is one of my favorite conversations. I love Cam.
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