First
Love is set in 1975. A church youth group is on a mission trip to New
Mexico, helping to build a model of a Spanish torreón
,
or tower, with adobe bricks. Working along side them is the
minister's son, Gabe. At first, Maddie thinks he's the man for her,
but soon Clayton tells her how much he loves her, and has since they
were kids. Though she's still friends
with Gabe, Clayton is her first love. There have been all kinds of
problems during the trip. For the time being, most of the youth group
is at the church auxiliary building, more or less alone—except for
one chaperon who's having heart palpitations.
Daniel
got up and went back to the boys' room. No one was sure if they
should follow him or not. Finally, Patti got up and went after him.
Clayton and Maddie decided to join them, leaving Richard with Denise.
He trailed in a few minutes later.
"Jeesh,
please don't leave me with her ever again. She wanted to make out.
Huhhh." He shuddered.
"She's
nearly as insufferable as Claire," Daniel said. "The only
one of them who came out of this a better person, is Beverly."
"At
least she's calm enough to sit with Les. I'm a wreck. I'm worried
sick about Gabe," Maddie said quietly.
Clayton's
face clouded. Maddie touched his hand.
"He's
my friend. At one point, I kind of hoped he might be more, but I'm
delighted with my choice. I would be more worried about you."
They
kissed lightly on the lips, as did Daniel and Patti.
"I'm
gonna go check on Beverly and Les," Richard said, rising
quickly. He stumbled out the door.
"I'm
going with," Brad mumbled as he backed toward the door.
The
boys laughed.
"Way
to clear a room, bro," Daniel teased. "If we want privacy,
we have a sure fire method. Shall we?" He opened his arms,
grinning at Patti.
"Don't
be getting ideas with all the sleeping bags around," Patti
chided.
"What
ideas?" Daniel tried to look innocent. "—that we haven't
already had a million times over. Give us some credit, huh? Kissing.
I promise. I'll sit on my hands." He did so.
Patti
leaned over to kiss him and the lights went out. Denise screamed from
the girls' room. Richard stumbled to the door, a lighter in one hand.
"What
the fuck, dude?" He looked scared. "Anyone got
flashlights?"
"I
have a flashlight," Patti said. "A little one on my
keyring." She dug through her purse, dropping it in disgust.
"Which I left at home because I don't need my keys in New
Mexico!"
"There
are some candles in the kitchen. I saw them in a cupboard,"
Maddie said. "Maybe there's a flashlight too. Can you see well
enough to find them?"
"I'm
not going alone," Richard said. "I've seen enough horror
movies. It never ends well for the guy who goes looking for candles."
"Oh,
for heaven's sake! I'll go," Maddie said.
"And
me," Clayton added. "Not letting you out of my sight."
"Someone
should stay with Bev," Patti said.
"Brad's
there. What about Denise?" Clayton asked.
"You
stay with her, Richard. We'll borrow the lighter and go get candles,"
Maddie decided.
"We'll
come with you," Patti said. "I'm not staying up here in the
dark. If I'm gonna get hacked to pieces, I want a running start."
"I'll
protect you," Daniel said, putting his arm around her.
"Be
glad it's not me," Richard said. "I'd trip your ass so they
got you first."
"And
yet you wonder why you have no girlfriend," Patti countered.
Richard
chuckled. He handed Clayton his lighter and walked into the room with
Denise. There was a little light from the outside.
"We'll
find candles or something," Clayton promised. "Just stay
put."
"I
assure you, I'm not going anywhere," Denise said.
"I'm
here for the duration," Richard replied. "So, you still
wanna make out?" he asked Denise as the others left.
"Are
you serious?" They heard her say as they closed the door.
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2015 Dellani Oakes
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