Keep your verbs in the simplest
form possible and try to avoid helping verbs. Sometimes, it's
unavoidable, but as much as possible, keep your writing in simple
past and don't add a bunch of other verbs to the lineup.
In case you don't know your
Helpers, here's a list:
am, are, is, was, were, be,
being, been (To Be verbs)
have, has, had (To Have verbs)
can, could
do, does, did (To Do verbs)
may, must, might
shall, should, will, would
Using
helping verbs weakens the narrative and should
be used
sparingly. Why? This one, I can answer. Keep your writing as active
as possible. Sometimes, you can't help it. A Helper is unavoidable in
some cases. Avoiding the use of was
entirely, as some misinformed authors try to do, is impossible. Was
is the past tense of To Be – I am (present) I was (past). Some
verbs must have a helper to be clear.
Example:
I was elected
president of the student body.
I
elected
president of the student body.
Not
only is the second sentence not really grammatical, it doesn't make
sense. If I chose to say – The student body elected me
president, that would work. I
left out was and still
wrote a clear sentence.
Why
is it important to avoid helpers? As I said above, they weaken the
narrative. Also, if the author gets too hung up in tenses, the
premise of the sentence, paragraph or story is lost in a fog of
verbs.
When
I was a teenager, we used to tease the husband of a friend of ours.
He was from Arkansas and, though he had a very polished manner of
speaking, he sometimes reverted to his backwoods roots.
“I
might should ought to could do that” was a favorite phrase to twit
him over. This is, understandably, an extreme example. However, when
dealing with the past, we authors sometimes don't know when to quit.
We don't stick with simple past, but jump into all those freakish
variables that require mountains of extra verbs. You know it's true.
It jumps off the page, snarling at you. Take a Louisville Slugger and
beat those suckers into submission.
Learn
to control the vicious helping verb beast.
© Dellani Oakes
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